Tuesday, September 22, 2020

The Stuck dog

 The Stuck dog

One time a dog was in a car and a loud song was playing on the radio. The dog was on the back seat. The radio was getting louder and louder the dog was scared. The car went faster then the dog got stuck in the car seat. The dog got worried and scared. 


The dog was barking but the driver couldn't hear because of the RADI0 until the dog cried when the car stopped. The dog said to himself ahhhh!!!! 


This hurts I’m gonna get out of here. The driver is coming. I can’t just stay here, this seat is slippery. Let me bark ruff, ruff. 


It  still didn’t work so the dog got nothing to do but the dog heard that the car will going flattened and turn into trash so the dog made  a plan by 

scratching the seat using it’s nails when he’d done it.


He made the plan. So the plan is to chew the car seat belt using it .

 Then he escaped. So the driver remember the dog in the car then the driver cry.


Then the driver saw a dog and when he realized that was his dog the dog looked like a dust dog then the driver said sorry.


THE END By kean


I am a yellow level this means- My narrative has an:introduction, problem, and a solution, plus some great word choices











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